creating characters so the reader has a better understanding of what the character looks like. if you feel like reading it, heres a link. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/86922/the-years-after-the-fall also, I am trying to create each pony. if you want me to create a pony that you want to see created in the fic, just let me know. same goes for if you want me to put your OC in it as well.
Well let me just say this, there are these things called memory orbs, which transport the characters into a memory, but they can only observe what is going on... Its kinda hard to explain but if you suddenly do not understand what is going on that is probably why. Also, the amount of memory orbs increase as you read
Dude..... If you think its awesome now...... You are literally going to be throwing up rainbows everywhere when you get to chapter... 20? Still, it gets better as you progress but once you get to like chapter 30 the story gets REALLY slow. But it picks back up again for an EPIC climax and the ending is great. What kept me reading was I had to know how it ended.